It’s no longer a pitch, it’s a sales offer. How to write one?
For a long time in my life, I thought the feeling that people receive from the word “sales” has been damaged by “unethical selling,” I even tried to find various words to replace it but, sales is what it is, selling and then, when one no longer concerns themselves with selling and concerns themselves to serving, i.e., helping that’s when that person becomes an excellent salesman/saleswoman, yes, by replacing selling for “helping,” now that’s how one can change a customer’s life.